on Pershore Rd.
a victory for someone
or somethingWe were mad
with the smuggled in Export
youngish monsters
baring our non-activity
unelected in our comic crowns
bejewelled in theory
Our faces didn't fit
and our shaved heads
our lapels
with badges missing
The word was SCORN (spilt ink
on nice clean sheets)
peeping out
from beneath our lids
and the bunting coming down
while we were idiot dancing
shining like God watchers
in the light of their laboured hate
Then home again
home again
vast in the back seats
declaring our sure sons’ love
As Mother drove
we offered her
strings of exquisite threats
for her unnamed enemies
for mythed-up history
of slick class slights
O that we might have
voices that hurt
and shake so
red and wounded
youngish monsters
baring our non-activity
unelected in our comic crowns
bejewelled in theory
Our faces didn't fit
and our shaved heads
our lapels
with badges missing
The word was SCORN (spilt ink
on nice clean sheets)
peeping out
from beneath our lids
and the bunting coming down
while we were idiot dancing
shining like God watchers
in the light of their laboured hate
Then home again
home again
vast in the back seats
declaring our sure sons’ love
As Mother drove
we offered her
strings of exquisite threats
for her unnamed enemies
for mythed-up history
of slick class slights
O that we might have
voices that hurt
and shake so
red and wounded
burning at the starting shot
to be revolting always and
to be revolting always and
laughing
with our unbit tongues
like the best of animals
with our unbit tongues
like the best of animals
declaring our sure sons’ love
ReplyDeleteAs Mother drove
we offered her
-- this moves from Ritual to Romance and then back again. The matriarchal goddess always needs defending.
Very true, though this particular Goddess is fierce enough at times, it must be said.
ReplyDeleteHer fire is ours, there being no daughters.
I feel the scathing anger in the car. It burns. Ouch.
ReplyDelete"The word was SCORN..." so perfect.
We were very fierce in those days.
ReplyDeleteI'd been a bit worried about capitalising there. It seemed a bit too brash but I went with the dirtier instinct. Thanks, Susan. I feel good about it now.
something sort of similar to this, theme, has been brewing in my head. inspiration sir, thanks.
ReplyDeleteGlad to be of service, V.
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