Saturday, 16 March 2013

Bus note 45

Priory School: boy and girl
won't listen to their Nanny,
        climbing over each other,
        playing and hurting.
Girl (about 6) mimics
the mitteleuropäische voice:
"Listen to me! Listen to me!"
        Strata are gleaming.
The air tastes of battery acid.
Money spells are thick here
        with the first deal
        long since done.
     

3 comments:

  1. A painfully accurate registration of something all too real, and extremely unpleasant.

    Human cruelty sometimes seems to have been instilled ab ovo -- is that the meaning of original sin?

    climbing over each other,
    playing and hurting...

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    Was this "deal" done before the beginnings of history -- or is the deal itself the first deed?

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    "Listen to me! Listen to me!"
    Strata are gleaming.
    The air tastes of battery acid.
    Money spells are thick here

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    The contamination of the aquifer, as far down and back as one goes...

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  2. I agree, Tom--there's always room for the "contaminated" at the water table, as this unadulterated poem shows.

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  3. Thank you, gentlemen.

    There hasn't been a sign of a poisoning of the water that's stuck with me like this. That little girl voice in mimicry; I can still hear it.

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